Review of Pitch

The overall feedback we received was quite good we had a couple of comments from the auidence, such as:

- Follows convention well
- Good knowledge of crime capers
- Reasonable analysis

We also got some comments on how we were going to operate we had to describe our location and some of our boarder line ideas. By this we mean having a budget for our production as we do not just want teenagers around a table chanting and being hustle also the characters cannot all be teenagers, if they are it would be less realistic. Ideally we will be able to locate some 'skin heads' and our people who look 'rough' or 'hard'. This is simply to comply with the stereotypical image of British crime capers. Once again in order to have these people around there might have to be an incentive for example a four pack of beer in a hope that people are easily bought if not there might be a reliance on family friends and acquaintances. However time will tell but soon there will be a published story board which will give a better insight into our storyline.