Feedback

Positive Feedback:

- lots of stage construction
- clear illustration of ideas
- lots of detail in their work
- good preparation for filming e.g. actors, location, costume
- good font research for title
- very well planned
- unique idea, shots explained well on synopsis and through the shot list
- nice mood board

Areas of Improvement:

- cant read the storyboard
- another film analysis
- animatic not posted yet
- not many blog posts
- project hasn't got potential


How the group is going to respond to the feedback:

we have decided to post more blogs, these will be based on ideas that can help make our film opening much better etc. We can't make the storyboard any clearer because it was shot on post-it notes, the animatic is being posted right now and the film analysis will be done shortly after, we aren't sure about how we can deal with the 'lack of potential' so we've decided to look at our work and see if there are any flaws which we can improve,


How does our blog compare to our thriller blog?

In general the film opening sequence blog is much better than our thriller opening blog, there is much more detail, more pictures and much more information.